Post by Broadwaykat on Jan 19, 2020 2:03:14 GMT
Hello Loafer,
After some discussion amongst the staff, we decided that while some of what you have written with Whisperkit is acceptable, there is an issue with her being only a moon old at the time she is found; as it is Leaf-bare, the likelihood of a lone kit being left alone for a day or so in the extreme cold would mean she would die.
A possible solution being if she were aged up a bit - to four moons instead of 1, making her having been weaned and a little bigger, possibly stronger, to survive. Then, were her parent to disappear - she could survive for a day or two, not hours like a moon-aged kit would.
If you could change this detail, we'd be glade to review the application.
After some discussion amongst the staff, we decided that while some of what you have written with Whisperkit is acceptable, there is an issue with her being only a moon old at the time she is found; as it is Leaf-bare, the likelihood of a lone kit being left alone for a day or so in the extreme cold would mean she would die.
A possible solution being if she were aged up a bit - to four moons instead of 1, making her having been weaned and a little bigger, possibly stronger, to survive. Then, were her parent to disappear - she could survive for a day or two, not hours like a moon-aged kit would.
If you could change this detail, we'd be glade to review the application.
